Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment?
More and more
people
admit that protecting the environment
is essential, but they prefer to chant Correct article usage
a slogan
slogan
rather than make real efforts on it. In my opinion, the fact that most Fix the agreement mistake
slogans
people
think protecting the environment
is not their duties
and they are too busy with their life to handle Fix the agreement mistake
duty
this
issue, and I will give some solutions ti
alleviate Correct your spelling
to
this
trend.
People
think to protect the environment
need many resources and costs, admit is affordably for each individual. That is
why people
are count
governments and authorities to improve the Wrong verb form
counting
environment
since they pay much in tax. Moreover
, citizens claim that they are struggling from
meet the ends and protecting the Change preposition
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environment
has many complex process
that they do not have enough time to Change to a plural noun
processes
such
things, like selecting different garbage into the right bin.
To relieve Add a missing verb
do such
this
situation, the first
thing is to raise people
's awareness that everyone has responsibility
to protect the Add an article
the responsibility
a responsibility
environment
, and change their pattern of thinking that protecting the earth is not a massive task. For instance
, if one person save
a bit Change the verb form
saves
energy
, the short of energy would be later than scientists’ prediction at present. Another way is to explain how to achieve these small things to protect the Change preposition
of energy
environment
, like using visual materials to introduce the steps of select garbage,
and using high-tech AI to Remove the comma
apply
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assist
people
to put their waste in right
way.
In conclusion, I reiterate my strong belief that the fact Add an article
the right
people
regarded protecting the environment
is
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as
institution's
responsibility and feel Correct article usage
an institution's
difficulty
to find Replace the word
difficult
a
easy way to protect the Change the article
an
environment
caused people
thought it is necessary to protect the environment
but make no effort to do anything about it. And people
can do other things more than chanting
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chant
slogan
.Fix the agreement mistake
slogans
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite