Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves.  Why do you think this is the case?  What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment?

More and more
people
admit that protecting the
environment
is essential, but they prefer to chant
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slogan
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rather than make real efforts on it. In my opinion, the fact that most
people
think protecting the
environment
is not their
duties
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and they are too busy with their life to handle
this
issue, and I will give some solutions
ti
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alleviate
this
trend.
People
think to protect the
environment
need many resources and costs, admit is affordably for each individual.
That is
why
people
are
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governments and authorities to improve the
environment
since they pay much in tax.
Moreover
, citizens claim that they are struggling
from
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meet the ends and protecting the
environment
has many complex
process
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that they do not have enough time to
such
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things, like selecting different garbage into the right bin. To relieve
this
situation, the
first
thing is to raise
people
's awareness that everyone has
responsibility
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the responsibility
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to protect the
environment
, and change their pattern of thinking that protecting the earth is not a massive task.
For instance
, if one person
save
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a bit
energy
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of energy
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, the short of energy would be later than scientists’ prediction at present. Another way is to explain how to achieve these small things to protect the
environment
, like using visual materials to introduce the steps of select garbage
,
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and using high-tech AI to
assistant
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people
to put their waste in
right
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way. In conclusion, I reiterate my strong belief that the fact
people
regarded protecting the
environment
is
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as
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institution's
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responsibility and feel
difficulty
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to find
a
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easy way to protect the
environment
caused
people
thought it is necessary to protect the
environment
but make no effort to do anything about it. And
people
can do other things more than
chanting
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slogan
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.
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