The population of many countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared to the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweighs the disadvantages.

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I am Suchaya Boonviriya from Thailand. I am writing to ask about opportunities for postgraduate study. I was awarded the Chulabhorn Royal Academy, College of Medical Science Scholarship in Commemoration of King Bhumibol Adulyadej’s 90th Birthday Anniversary. I intend to study for a PhD programme in the Faculty of Nursing, Midwifery & Palliative

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area at the King’s College London under your guidance. I graduated with a bachelor 's degree in nursing science and experienced working in a Neurological Intensive

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and safety. I have conducted a master research thesis about the risk of breast cancer in rotating shift nurses and non-rotating shift nurses by studying melatonin, estrogen levels and other relative factors. Apart from experience in Thailand, I have worked in various healthcare areas

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, and medical equipment in Australia for 2.5 years.

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, with regard to recent working experience at Telehealth Cluster, Faculty of Medicine, Chulalongkorn University,I am aware of the importance of technology techniques

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is because it is impossible to determine when the aneurysm might rupture. There will not be any signs or symptoms to alert the patient of the potential threat. But I strongly believe a huge amount of data could create prediction models and evaluations.

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attached. I would be very grateful to you if you will examine it. In case of any query or

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processing, feel free to contact me. Thank you very much for your time and consideration, and for any comments you could give me. I may request you to provide me with an opportunity to pursue my higher studies under your kind supervision.

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