Some people say that competitive sports have advantages for people from different groups and countries, while others believe that competitive sports only create problems between people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the habits in how Indonesian celebrate independence days is a conduct competitive

sports

. Some of the games are involving

people

from the multibackground. There are 2 perspectives related to

this

issue, one side think competitive

sports

is a tool to increase the solid of the organization but others view that it will impact negatively all the population

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in the activity.

First

, the views that competitive

sport

can enhance the solidness of the

team

. "There no forever opponent of forever friends, the needed was".

This

well said quote shows that the same objective of a group of

people

can change

people

that were enemies before becoming friends. What

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in that quote

also

shows in the

sport

that focuses on competition. The community who have the same purpose

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as

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winning the

game

will become a great

team

and will focus on how to make their enemies weaker and their

team

could win the

game

. The others issues

besides

the purpose, namely the difference of origin country or group, not will

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since the eager being the winner is more important than that. By creating the

sport

competitive

people

will trust their partners who

is

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in the same boat and try to make the enemies lose the

game

.

However

, if the implementation of competitive

sport

is the group that has just been established yet can endanger the solidness of the big

team

. We have to make the minimal impact of disadvantages. the two teams that strive to be winners will do the best that they can do. Some of the acts to achieve the goal can make trust issues. So when the organization came back to the real work or real school they became more sensitive and could not believe in others. Despite the disadvantage, I think the advantage of competitive

sports

for communities from different groups

is outweigh

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the disadvantage. It really depends on how we can socialize after the

sports

game

, and manage the trust issues. We can wisely manage it by separating the

game

and the working life.