Some cities ban private cars from entering the center and force people to use bicycles and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Most cities prohibit

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cars enter

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the downtown and obligate people to use

bycycles

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bicycles

and buses.

Althoug

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Although

daily activities will be more complex and it will

requiere

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require

more

time

to get to our destination, I believe the advantages

outweight

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outweigh

the

disadvatages

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disadvantages

disadvantage

because of the necessity to protect the

environment

and educate young generations to offer a better world to our

children

. It is true that daily activities will become more complex because citizens should not

be allow

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to use their cars, so society

need

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to learn how

use

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time

management. It is necessary to re-learn how to start the day earlier to get

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form

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point A to point B.

Also

,

this

might lead to

do

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only the most important activities to save

time

and manage our

time

. Another reason is that society will

requiere

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require

take extra

time

to get to their destination, so they will have to go

bed

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earlier and wake up early as well. On top of

this

, it is necessary to arrange

children

's

schedule

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for those who drive their

children

before getting to work.

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, In Mexico

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, there is a law that

forbid

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certain

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number of plates to circulate for three days and

this

has reduced the contamination notoriously.

However

, I

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belive

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people

has

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to learn

different

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style of living to follow

this

new rule which is totally

gret

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great

for the planet. The world is screaming for help and humanity should protect the

environment

to avoid overusing the resources. Every year, climate changes and it is obvious that fauna and flora

is

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being affected as well as humans.

Beside

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this

, it is impossible to continue

this

way without suffering the side effects

such

as rising

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temperatures every year. The

second

advantages

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is that young adults should learn how to respect and protect the planet and educate their

sibilings

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siblings

and parents at home.

Moreover

, once people

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aware

about

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the real issue, citizens tend to think twice and make better choices every day to protect our

environent

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environment

.

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; In China,

young

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generation

have

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been thought to protect their

environment

that now those

teeneyears

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teen years

avoid

harm

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their planet by avoiding pollution

their

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community. In my opinion, is better to take the bus to avoid more contamination into our

environment

, so

this

might reduce pollution and improve the air condition. To conclude,

although

it might be more work to take the bus, one must make an effort to protect our

environment

and offer a better world to our

children

. For these reasons the advantages

outweight

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outweigh

the disadvantages.