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some people think music serve many different purposes in society while others think it is only a form of entertainment. What is your view?

In the 21st century, with the advance of technology and widely spread of information, there are a number of websites and
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apps
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 like YouTube, apple
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 and Spotify, where
people
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 can enjoy listening to their
favorite
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music
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.
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, there are various kinds of
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such
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 as classic, pop, country and blues, which
people
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 can listen to. Some
people
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 think listening to
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 is just
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entertainment for us.
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, it’s not
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 and
music
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 are widely being used in multiple ways. There are two vital
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reasons
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 for that – stress reliever and
leaning
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learning
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language
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.
Firstly
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, listening to
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are
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 the best way for human to release their stress. Nowadays,
people
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 prefer to listen to
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 not only for leisure activity but
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a
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way to relax.
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, during yoga, meditation or
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 therapy section,
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 usually play light or classic
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 to relax their mind and body.
Secondly
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, singing and listening to
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 are the best and easiest ways to learn a
language
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.
Music
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 is an assessable and common recourse in humans’ daily life. Statistics show that singing or listening to rhythmic
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 helps young kids to learn a different
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 faster rather than lecture. There are a lot of
songs
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, which are written for children to sing
such
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 as ABC song and London
bridge
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 is falling down, and these
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 are usually catchy and earworm for kids to learn. In conclusion,
music
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 has become an essential and significant part
in
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 peoples’ life and most
people
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 can’t live without it.
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,
music
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 serves many different
purpose
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 in
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society now like
release
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 stress and learning
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language
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a language
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.

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