research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. some people believe the government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. discuss both view and give your opinion.

There is no denying that the inexorable increase in volumes of transit of goods and

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contributes most significantly to

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. Opinions are divided as to whether the authorities are responsible for

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phenomenon or all

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are to blame. Personally, I believe that both the

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and

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culpable for

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case.

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, advocates of the former view may claim that the massive

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is attributed to incompetent handling and insufficient solutions by the

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. Undoubtedly, in several parts of the world, authorities have not imposed stringent policies to restrain the number of private

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and deliveries of goods,

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resulting in an overwhelming

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system.

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, advocates of

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belief may

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claim that it is the onus of the

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to tackle all social issues, including environmental issues.

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, should the

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of products and

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remain unchecked and continuously exacerbate

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, the

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will be blameworthy.

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, proponents of the idea that

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are responsible for increasingly excessive

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may argue that

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the lack of awareness of the public. Unarguably, in several nations, most

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a concerted attempt to shun private

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as cars or motorbikes altogether and switch to eco-friendly means of transport.

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,

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improper social conscience potentially begets a burgeoning use of

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transports for personal reasons and

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of goods. In conclusion, I firmly assert that the massive

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of

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being the major cause of

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should be ascribed to both the authorities and

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evenly, regarding inefficient governmental interventions

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lacking individual concern for

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. Indeed, it would be effective and proper for the

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to implement environmentally sound practices and

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make the transition to environment-eco-friendly

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.