In theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Advertisement has always been viewed as the most workable means of the
products
' introduction.
Nowdays
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, the focus of these advertisements is on highlighting specific novel features of each product since the competition between companies is getting harder. Various rationales are being suggested by experts for
this
phenomenon which has both positive and negative aspects.
However
, I believe that the positive side clashes with the negative one. The following essay will overlook one reason of the advertising focus on those new aspects which is proceeding by a rationale that supports my idea.
To begin
, people have an inclination to buy the existing famous
products
which have already been examined, and convincing customers to buy a new product in
this
strict
competetory
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competitors
competitor
era is becoming continuously harder.
For example
,before Samsung introduced its new options to the world which were not available in
Iphone
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iPhone
,
Iphone
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iPhone
had been sold as the most popular cellphone around the world for many years,
although
Samsung had been providing many
high quality
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products
in the same period .
Thus
, the weaker companies have to entice people by advertising the new features of their
products
otherwise
the strong companies will
be consistently remained
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the most popular ones. One obvious and considerable positive consequence that
this
phenomenon has brought is for
the
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humans to benefit from the continuous improvement of these
products
.
For instance
, the safety of cars
have
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been improving by adding
a
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various
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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to those
vehichles
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vehicles
to convince customers to buy them.
Consequently
, people have
a vast options
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vast options
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to buy that each clashes with the other in a different way. To sum up, advertising has been changed to focus more on the new options that each company provides for their buyers and it is rooted in the competition that newly generated businesses have with the older ones. I believe that the improvement it has brought for the industry makes
this
phenomenon in the
favor
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of the community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Competition
  • Consumer demand
  • Novelty
  • Innovation
  • Progress
  • Differentiation
  • Attract
  • Generate
  • Interest
  • Positive aspect
  • Negative aspect
  • Emphasize
  • Balancing
  • Quality
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