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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

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In the modern era, many
people
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 are increasingly interested to
visit
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 inaccessible
places
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such
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 as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic because advanced technology and improving transportation systems make it easier to access. These
areas
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 attract the
people
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 who like adventure trips, educational purposes
such
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 as research
people
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, journalists...etc.
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, there are pros and cons for the travellers who like to
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 these kinds of
areas
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.
To begin
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 with, there are different types of intension on a trip among the tourists. Some are like to travel as a vacation, some like historical
areas
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 and some rare population like to
visit
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 remote
areas
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such
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 as deserts, north pole, south pole..etc. The benefit for the travellers gets from these
areas
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 are to learn about the nature of species who can survive in a deadly environment.
For instance
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, the rattlesnakes, how they can find the prey in the desert and how they live in.
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, the polar bears, how to hunt for their daily foods in the freezing temperature.
On the other hand
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, these
places
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 have very dangerous weather and environments. For a normal person, it is very hard to survive in these
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. Only those who have experienced and are professionally trained
people
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 should go
visit
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.
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, the danger will occur any minute.
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, as these
places
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 are located in very far remote
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, it is unlikely to save the
people
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's life if anything happens life-threatening case. To sum up,
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, these
areas
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 are attractive to some types of special
people
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 and those
people
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 should aware of the consequences before deciding to
visit
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 because these
places
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 are not for relaxation purposes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • unique experiences
  • ecosystems
  • conservation efforts
  • economic benefits
  • environmental degradation
  • habitat destruction
  • safety risks
  • extreme weather conditions
  • navigation
  • high price tag
  • specialized equipment
  • influx
  • strain on local resources
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