the diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle and anatomy of a
lady bird
.
Correct your spelling
ladybird
Overall
, the lady bird
consists of 4 life cycles; egg stage, larval stage, pupa stage and adult. Correct your spelling
ladybird
Moreover
, its body is composed of seven parts.
In its life cycle, it begins with the laying of an egg in the leaf which lasted for 2 to 5 days and became a larva for the 21 days occurrence. Afterwards, it turns out into a pupa by adhering to the leaf for almost 7 days. Finally
, it totally developed into an adult ladybug.
Moreover
, a lady bird
consisted of a head part with 2 antennas Correct your spelling
ladybird
as well as
eyes and pronotum. Its red elytra with dark spots covered the abdomen and wings. Likewise
it has a total of 6 legs; 3 on the right side and 3 on the left side.Add a comma
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