In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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versus the younger one which was always a hotly debatable topic without any qualms has now become more controversial with many people claiming that age is more valued while others reject

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notion there are myriad things to be shared in its favour but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that the youth

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is substantial valuable asses for any country. For ,example nowadays companies prefer to employ youths due to a ton of reasons

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as they perform longer hours per week due to being energetic and actively participating in a range of programmes which lead to

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of a company as well presenting crucial ideas and strategies to boost the income. ,

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they bring a diversity of logical thoughts due to vast academic background and fresh knowledge enables a company to perform excel and problem solver and tend to do work in

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the most necessary things in

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modern world.

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view carries a high weight and cannot be ignored. Moving towards the

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point of issue is that some powerful cultures seldom to their old

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because they are more experienced and contributed major parts of life.

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people who are 65 years old and devoted more than 40 years of life consider key valuable assets due to their vast amount of experience and lessor mistakes. apart from

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some countries play utmost attention to their old

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for taking valuable input for a crucial decision

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has vital footprints due to multi-exposure. To recapitulate according to the arguments mentioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the younger

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is vital in future prospects and lead a role for all aspects for all mankind.