Should wealthy countries be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing things such as food and education or is it the responsibility of the government of poorer nation to look after their citizen themselves.

It is frequently argued that prosperous

countries

have to proportion their wealth with the poorer country through imparting them true

meals

and training

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until imparting

meals

and training.

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, poorer

countries

have to now no longer rely absolutely

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furnished through wealthy

countries

. The

first

principal motive is that the sturdy monetary circumstance of the evolved international

locations

can without difficulty assist the human

beings

of poorer international

locations

through nourishing them with healthful

meals

and terrific academic opportunities.

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, doing

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humanitarian paintings will now no longer place any burden

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the finances of rich

countries

.

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providing primary vital matters together with training and

meals

centres. The 2nd motive is that the citizen of each wealthy and negative country is human

beings

.

Therefore

, it will become the ethical and moral responsibility of the economically sound international

locations

to lend a supporting hand to the human

beings

of

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country

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who're

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of life because of hunger and noxious diseases.

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, rich international

locations

can save you the human

beings

of economically susceptible international

locations

from

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future.

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of the Asian wealthy international

locations

assist African human

beings

to steer a

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lifestyles through blessing them with primary centres together with

meals

and fine training.

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with

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nation

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, is vital,

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volume of offering

meals

and academic facilities. Offering extra

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to poorer

nations

with the aid of using the rich

countries

will bring about making financially weaker

nations

slaves of wealthy

countries

. In conclusion, I assert that it will become

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of wealthy

nations

to uplift the low disadvantaged

countries

, specifically in

meals

and the schooling sector.

However

, poorer

nations

must now no longer rely absolutely

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the aid supplied with the aid of using wealthier

nations

and save you themselves from the state of affairs of turning into slaves of economically sound

nations

.