The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The given tables provide the
sales
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of
coffee
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and
bananas
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which had Fairtrade labels in five different countries in Europe within 5
years
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or between 1999 and 2004. The Fairtrade of
coffee
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and
bananas
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indicate that the farmers who produced these products are from developing state and have been paid a reasonable price for their production and the wholesale price are given in millions of
Euros
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.
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,
it is clear that
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the majority of the nations experienced
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increased
sales
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in five
years
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of those products and the biggest rise in
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were
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in the UK and Switzerland respectively. In 2004, the UK was the largest market for Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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while
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Sweden
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was the country with the lowest
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of
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product. There was a significant increase in
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Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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sales
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in the UK in 2004 than that of 5
years
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ago from 1.5 to 20
million
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Euros
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.
However
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,
Sweden
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was the nation with the lowest trade of
coffee
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within 5
years
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than the trade in the other four nations. As for the sale of
bananas
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, the market of the Fairtrade-labelled of
this
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product showed a dramatic increase within 5
years
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between 1999 and 2004. Meanwhile, Switzerland was the largest market for Fairtrade-labelled
bananas
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sales
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and it reached 47
million
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Euros
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in 2004 which was higher than the
sales
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in the other four countries. The number of
sales
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of
bananas
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decreased in
Sweden
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and Denmark in 2004 than that of 1999.
Sales
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of
bananas
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in Belgium and
Sweden
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declined by about a half from around 2
million
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to around 1
million
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Euros
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, years, euros, sweden, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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