Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Enviroment
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Environment
is the most essential part of all living organisms on the Earth.
However
, a large bunch of
people
tries to blame the
goverment
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government
for
this
, while other blame themselves. In my opinion, one should take
responsibilty
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responsibility
to save the
enviroment
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environment
, along with the norms prepared by the govt. to help our Eco-system.
This
essay will
disccuss
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discuss
both
the
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views.
General
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public is the one who
interact
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with
the
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nature most, it is
there
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duty to save the environment
large
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a large
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number of
people
prefer personal vehicle over
the
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public transport is the main reason for the nature destruction from
green houses
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greenhouses
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gases apart from
this
peoples should
also
motivate and help other to spread awareness about moving to buy biodegradable or paper bags rather than plastic bags.
On the other hand
government play please a significant role in protecting the Eco-system as it should try to switch to Eco-friendly infrastructure by imposing
ban
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a ban
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on all
the
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plastic products, and
also
providing sanctions for environmental projects which will encourage the development of
such
infrastructure as well as spread awareness among the
people
.
Government
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The government
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also
need to encourage
people
by giving appropriate reward to help to save the environment in any possible way. In conclusion,
although
the government does play an important
important
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part
in
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in the environment
but
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it is our
individual
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individuals
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who
need
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to step up for the task.
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