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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. Whare are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

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In some countries, a lot of people would rather rent their houses than
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purchase them. In
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 will be talking about the advantages and disadvantages of renting a
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. To start with, renting a
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 can be beneficial simply because as a tenant you do not need to perform any maintenance of the
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. If something breaks and needs fixing, all you need to do is call the owner or the manager of the property to come and take a look. Another advantage is if you need to relocate you can do it anytime without any fear
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 having to sell the
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 or to look for tenants. Having said that, there are disadvantages of renting a
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 rather than buying it.
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, if you are renting a
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 it means you are literally paying for someone else's bond as we call it here or his/her mortgage. If you rent for many years that money that you are paying could have been yours and you could have been
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 with your mortgage.
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 renting a
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 means you cannot change anything in that
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. You have to deal with whatever is there because you have no right over anything on that property. It is someone's else
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. To conclude one simply has to do what makes them happy and comfortable, whether to rent or buy the
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