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Many working people get little or no excercise either during tge workinf days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise? What can be done about this problem.

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a
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time for
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excercise
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exercise
 is because of their busy
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. As The standard
work
 timings require 8-9 hours after it
people
 get very limited time for the other
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activities
such
 as being with their
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families
, managing daily chores etc.
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therefore
 working
people
 do not get enough time for the workout.
additionally
, doing
excercise
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exercise
exercises
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also
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dependent
 on the culture as in Asia most of the
people
 find it normal not to
work
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 care of their health, lack of awareness and
proritising
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prioritising
excercise
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exercise
 over other
work
 is not common. To solve
this
 problem, It is very important for the
people
 to
first
 understand the importance of the
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workout
work out
 at
daily
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 basis, There should be
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on
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 how exercise is
the
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 crucial part of our daily routine and what are the benefits
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it.
furthermore
,
People
 need to set a routine regularly to
work
 even if
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 15 minutes.
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