The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The map illustrates the information about the change of university sports centre from now to future plans. Overall, the centre is going to be a huge building and the outdoor courts will be removed. There will be more facilities in the centre. The outdoor courts at the west side of the buildings are going to be replaced by a leisure pool which is placed inside the building. When you enter the lobby, the reception is still in the front and a new sports shop will be located at the west of the reception.

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, a changing room will be situated beside the shop before going to the pool. The current 25-meter pool, changing room and seating will be no change in the future while the gym will be double the size.

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, the outdoor courts at the west side of the buildings are going to be replaced by a sports hall and two new dance studios will be located in the east of the building. A cafe is going to be situated on the right-hand side of the entrance

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a changing room will be nearby.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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5 paragraphs

186 words

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