In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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of business companies in present normally give

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vital attention which their goods are recent in some path. There are

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several reasons why some

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always keep

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brand new products. In my

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of their businesses and have many factors to consider about them.

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product

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is important.

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is probably because some corporation believes that activated themself might be able to motivate customers to follow

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trend. They want to reflect the attitude of their organisation or their perspective of

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that might make users see who they are. From my point of view, it is understandable why some would have the idea that they need to make more

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for improve

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.

However

, I personally believe that there are numerous positive effects more than negative sides

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each project. In my country,

for instance

, fashion shops have

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collection every

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which make me feels interested

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their clothes design and I definitely got to purchase it :

moreover

, If the product has good quality, it will bring a large number of earnings, but the goods is not unique enough to motivate

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. Even so, the lower quality of results might be affect

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of

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. For

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causes, it is apparent that procedure latest product has plentiful advantages ;

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desirable

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thing. To sum up, a diverse of business bands at

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time generally focus the point that their outcomes are newly arrived.

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, it seems that a lot of logic

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these days,

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it

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on choosing or buyer's view.