Some shops are open 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Do you think it is a good thing for the customer, the shop staff and the company as a whole?
Nowadays many shopping complexes and
shops
are available for customers
24/7.I believe it is a better for Customers
as well as it is a benefit for the shop crew to earn more money by doing extra work.I will discuss a few things about the statement in the below paragraph.
Firstly
,when the shops
can run every day
without closing it can be good for the customers
and also
it's a benefit for them.The people in the world have a busy life schedule they live in hustle and bustle world,They don't have enough time at the day
to buy the things if the shops
can be available at every day
and night
it helps for them to buy the things in the night
. For instance
,recently I face a situation I went to another state for my work ,after completion of my job
I returned to my staying room .I am So I ask the hotel crew if they provide food at night
they said no,then
I went to one of the streets in Chennai , and I ate my dinner at 12 "0 clocks. After ,that I imagined how the shops
help the customers
every day
.
In addition
, opening the shops
every night
also
helps so many of them who didn't have a job
to get the job
likely It also
helps the nation to raise the economy. The Employment rate in the nation also
develop
GDP.They can earn a solid amount of money by doing work ,ate nights.In recent times,new york GDP has been raised by implementing the system of having Change the verb form
develops
shops
24/7 .
In conclusion,certain shops
are open every day
and night
helps the customers
and also
it helps the government to increase the economy.It helps the staff member and provides employment to the job
seekers.Overall it can be good for customers
and the shop staff as well as the company.Submitted by sekharkoruprolu0 on
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