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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #bout #history #house #research
The charts give information about the change in percentage of households owning different electrical appliances and the number of hours each household spent on housework per week from 1920 to 2019. There was an overall increasing trend for
ownership
 of all three electrical appliances, among which there was
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 increase in
ownership
 of refrigerators, from 0% in 1920 to 90% in 1980, before reaching 100% in 1980. Vacuum cleaners started at 30% in 1920 and the
ownership
 gradually rose to 100% in 2000.
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,
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 the
ownership
 of washing
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 was the highest (at 40%) in 1920, it slowly increased to 70% in 1960 and dropped slightly in 1980, before reaching just over 70% in 2019. The
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 the number of hours each household spent on washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning every week. The number dropped from 50 hours per week in 1920 all the way to slightly above 10% in 2019.
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