In many Countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
Since smoking
is commonly
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commonly seems
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seen
in
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apply
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everywhere
every where
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everywhere
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apply
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is
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public
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a public
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place
. In my opinion, I firmly agree thatFix the agreement mistake
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,
because using cigarettes impact Remove the comma
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people
who are close to them or teenage behaviour and cause health issues.
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the smoking
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public
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place
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places
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as parks, outside schools and bus stops, countless children will access Linking Words
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affect
effect
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, a lot of my friends and I started to interested in smoking was when we saw Linking Words
people
smoking in the park. Use synonyms
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teenager’s
behaviours will be Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers’
impected
by smokers.
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impacted
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people
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people
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relax
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ingredience
which is nicotine, it breaks Correct your spelling
ingredients
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people
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weakness
, and if you smoke more longer it will Add an article
a weakness
brings
terrible illness which is cancers to you. Change the verb form
bring
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people
are smoking tobacco Use synonyms
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everywhere
every where
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everywhere
people
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such
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second-hand
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, smoking not only put yourself in danger Linking Words
also
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other person
.
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another person
other people
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past
pass
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past
people
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allows
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allow
to smoke
tobacco Change the verb form
smoking
in
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apply
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everywhere
every where
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everywhere
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a restaurant
restaurant
or entertainment Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
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place
, it is a bad influence Fix the agreement mistake
places
to
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on
younagers
to elders. So, I strongly agree that not allow Correct your spelling
youngsters
younger
youngers
to have
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having
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a cigarette
cigarette
in Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
public
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a public
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place
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