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Academic The data below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Wastage is the major problem that every country is facing. Here, we will discuss the overall garbage produced by three companies.
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 essay will discuss both views and give a concluding view. On one hand, in the past 15 years ie., from 2000 to 2015, an association named A has produced around 12 tonnes of garbage which is very high
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 to Organisation A and B.
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, company B has generated around 9 tonnes of waste material while in comparison with company C.
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, the least waste produced by the
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 company is less than all the 3 companies. Companies producing waste must rethink meaning that, they should think twice only the material which can be used after it is recycled must be collected. To conclude, I personally suggest that any recyclable misuse should be recycled as it saves the environment and
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 it helps future generations.
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