Nowadays children are experiencing increased educational, social and commercial pressure. What are the reasons for this? What can be a solution to reduce the pressure?

As the world is getting competitive with many young talents competing for the same but limited position,

children

of today’s generations are dealing with extreme

pressure

in their journey of life.

Although

we can not blame our social structure for the reasons behind its cause, we can minimize their effects by understanding them deeply. In

this

essay, I will sort out the reasons and provide solutions to reduce

such

pressure

.

One

of the major reasons to experience increased

pressure

on juveniles is the extreme competition and high parental expectations.

In other words

, there is a high challenge in front of a child since the school days, either for getting top grades to enter an excellent university or to win any sports games. At the same time, there is

pressure

from parents asking their

children

for high scores in exams or higher job positions. In Korea, Japan,

for instance

, high school graduates are compelled to study for more than 8 hours to enter top universities.

Furthermore

, there is a social media competition for sharing achievements to attract

others

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attention which could be unreal than what they actually post.

Such

activities bring

the

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sense of jealousy and comparison for

one

another. It is hard to deny the competition

prevailed

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in the community but we can decrease the

pressure

brought by them

in

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children

.

One

solution is to mentor them by looking at the bright side of other possibilities in future. To clarify,

instead

of getting frustrated for not entering into the top university or obtaining high marks in exams or being rejected from many jobs, they have to be guided that some big opportunity might be waiting for them and always inspire

to

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keep digging for new possibilities.

One

more help would be avoiding comparison in life which means

to focus

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on personal goals but not

to find

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the reality of everything seen on social media. In conclusion,

nevertheless

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in comparison to past generations,

children

of the present are struggling in every aspect of their life,

however

, proper guidance can lead them to overcome that

pressure

and become successful in future.