Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Residing in a state where you have to talk a different
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from yours can create problems even practically. I agree to a greater extent with
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topic. So in
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essay, I will be talking about why I agree. Learning how to speak a foreign
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takes passion, time and dedication. Some people are naturally born for
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. They catch the
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faster than others. For those who struggle to learn, it can create difficulties for them like not being able to socialize with other individuals. They tend to keep to themselves which in many instances can cause stress and depression. Not being able to communicate with others because of
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language
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barrier can
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lead to withdrawal from
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in activities with friends or colleagues. There are certain games that
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one to be familiar with the
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spoken there which may
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not participate. Some persons will end up making mistakes simply because they did not understand an order that was given in a
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they do not understand. Several people misinterpret what was said which may lead to accidents and even fights. There are jobs like being a waitress or waiter where you have to take orders from customers. If you do not understand the
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you can
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take
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orders and create problems for yourself.
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agree with the statement, I
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believe that where there is a will there is a way. Toddlers who cannot even talk somehow find ways to communicate and can spend the whole
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playing together without understanding each other. I
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think with adults it can be the same. If push comes to shove, sign
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can be used for better communication. In
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I think if you are in a foreign land, learning their
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is essential not only for your good but for everyone's sake.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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