Some people say that advertisment make us buy things we do not really need some other says advertisement tell us about many new products that can improve our daily life
In today’s world we do not really need. Now I give my opinion.
advertisement
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for improving daily lifestyle. Here I personally, discuss Replace the word
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Ithink
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I think
advertisement
influenced us to buy things, however
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,
Advertisement
is beneficial for consumers and companies, but sometimes the advertisement
is fake. T.v commercial gives wrong
information. Correct article usage
the wrong
For example
- online apps like Ajio give a discount
on babies cloth, but they cut the amount from cards full
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advertisement
gives information about brands. In this
situation, brands discounts are helpful for people to purchase new things because brands discount
provide good services. But there us only big business afford new products. For
example
Adidas gives a 60% Add a comma
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discount
on daily wear.these do not fake.
In conclusion advertisement
aware information about products. I can say that people's responsibilities they should buy the product according to their need.Submitted by sonysondh on
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