Some people say that advertisment make us buy things we do not really need some other says advertisement tell us about many new products that can improve our daily life

In today’s world
advertisement
isememt influences people to buy new things advertising is
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best way to introduce
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new
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for improving daily lifestyle. Here I personally, discuss
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I think
advertisement
influenced us to buy things,
however
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we do not really need. Now I give my opinion.
Advertisement
is beneficial for consumers and companies, but sometimes the
advertisement
is fake. T.v commercial gives
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information.
For example
- online apps like Ajio give a
discount
on babies cloth, but they cut the amount from cards
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however
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they are mentioned
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%
discount
.
On the other
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the
advertisement
gives information about brands. In
this
situation, brands discounts are helpful for people to purchase new things because brands
discount
provide good services. But there us only big business afford new products.
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Adidas gives a 60%
discount
on daily wear.these do not fake. In conclusion
advertisement
aware information about products. I can say that people's responsibilities they should buy the product according to their need.
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