The charts below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range of the years 1990 and 2010.
The chart illustrates the proportion of the UK population in different
age
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groups
providing money to charity in both 1990 and 2010.
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Overall
, the most percentage of having given money to charity was the middle Linking Words
age
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group
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that
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apply
ages
between 36 and 50 in 1990, Wrong verb form
aged
while
the older Linking Words
age
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group
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that
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apply
ages
between 51 and 65 provided the most financial in 2010. In the first three Wrong verb form
aged
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groups
, the percentage Use synonyms
was
sharply decreased. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, in the Linking Words
last
two Linking Words
age
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groups
, there Use synonyms
were
a slightly increased in proportions.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
According to
the first three Linking Words
age
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groups
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including
the range of ages between 18 and 25,26 to 35 and 36 to 50. Focusing on the first Replace the word
include
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group
, there was a dramatic drop from about upper 15% to more than 5%. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
in
the Change preposition
between
age
between 26 and 35, there was a decline from over 30% to under 25%. Use synonyms
Finally
, the middle Linking Words
age
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group
made the highest percentage, there was a bit fall from about 42% to 35%. All three Use synonyms
groups
were changed in 1990 and the Use synonyms
next
ten years.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
last
two Linking Words
age
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groups
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were
gradually rose from 35% to just under 40% and from about 32% to 35, respectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
Therefore
, it is obvious that all Linking Words
age
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groups
expressed different trends in both 1990 and 2010.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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