The charts below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range of the years 1990 and 2010.
The chart illustrates the proportion of the UK population in different
age
groups
providing money to charity in both 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the most percentage of having given money to charity was the middle age
group
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
ages
between 36 and 50 in 1990, Wrong verb form
aged
while
the older age
group
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
ages
between 51 and 65 provided the most financial in 2010. In the first three Wrong verb form
aged
age
groups
, the percentage was
sharply decreased. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, in the last
two age
groups
, there were
a slightly increased in proportions.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
According to
the first three age
groups
including
the range of ages between 18 and 25,26 to 35 and 36 to 50. Focusing on the first Replace the word
include
age
group
, there was a dramatic drop from about upper 15% to more than 5%. Secondly
, in
the Change preposition
between
age
between 26 and 35, there was a decline from over 30% to under 25%. Finally
, the middle age
group
made the highest percentage, there was a bit fall from about 42% to 35%. All three groups
were changed in 1990 and the next
ten years.
On the other hand
, the last
two age
groups
were
gradually rose from 35% to just under 40% and from about 32% to 35, respectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
Therefore
, it is obvious that all age
groups
expressed different trends in both 1990 and 2010.Submitted by nopcharai.si on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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