With the continuous evolution of the first class services, some people may think that the airplane companies neglected the advantages of other passengers. In my opinion, while first-class passengers certainly enjoy premium service, most advances benefit all passengers.

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With the continuous evolution of
first
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-class
services
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, some people may think that the aeroplane companies neglected the advantages of other
passengers
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. In my opinion, while
first
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-class
passengers
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certainly enjoy premium service, most advances benefit all
passengers
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. It is an undeniable truth that air travel can easily be seen as
first
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class in terms of premium, private facilities and
services
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. People travelling
first
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class are now able to enjoy pull out beds and a private area where they can work with power outlets and wifi connections. Some airlines even have special offers for
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-class
passengers
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to wait until they go on board.
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, a VIP room with free food and magazines.
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, with
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luxurious
services
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, customers naturally have to pay a high price.
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, the fee for a
first
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-class seat can be up to HKD$20000.
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, even though air travel enhanced the
services
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of the high class, there is a price for the customers to pay.
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, it cannot be said that the budget traveller has not benefited from the developments in commercial air travel.
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the seating area may still be cramped causing
passengers
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discomfort, particularly on long haul flights, the developments have allowed them to
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enjoy technological luxuries
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as individual inflight entertainment options.
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, the food offered to budget commercial travellers has vastly improved,
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admittedly
this
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is only available on long haul flights. In conclusion, even though
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-class enjoy some extra perks,
passengers
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have to pay a much higher price for that.
On the other hand
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, customers that choose other perks can get meals and comfortable
services
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from the aircrews as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • continuous evolution
  • neglected
  • advantages
  • premium service
  • advances
  • benefit
  • passengers
  • level of service
  • improvements
  • comfort
  • amenities
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