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Some people think that economic growth is the only solution to stop poverty and hunger, while others think that economic growth is damaging the environment and should be stopped immediately. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In today's modern era, the impact of economic
development
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 is debated. some people believe that it is harming the
environment
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 whereas others believe that economic
development
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 is helping countries to eradicate
poverty
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 and hunger. in my ,opinion the only way to stop
poverty
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 is through economic advancement by creating jobs and growth in various sectors.
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, to end
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 the government of those
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 world countries need to create more jobs by building plants for producing goods to export. these factories will create demand for labour and eventually these workers will have a source of income.
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, they can create wealth and improve their lifestyle.
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, countries that have limited natural resources need to grow their economies in different sectors in order to end
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.
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 Singapore they have spent many years in the financial sector in order to stay competitive in the market and now they have become the richest nation in the whole Asia region.
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, it is undeniable that building the economy of a country will affect the
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. some people argue that it will accelerate global warming because
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 often involves deforestation. Trees are cut down to build houses.
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, carbon dioxide will increase significantly and potentially will worsen the global warming issues.
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, halting the economy is not the solution rather we should find ways to grow the economy without harming the
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. In conclusion,
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 some economic damage will inevitably occur people can enjoy better life when jobs are created. If the country says no to environmental
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 for the sake of the
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 they will not be able to survive for long.
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, on balance, I believe that economic
development
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 is the only way for the country to grow and prosper as
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 it should not be halted.
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