Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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Nowadays, it is undeniable that many individuals choose their

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which they are neither fascinated nor passionate about. In the following paragraphs, the cause and effect will be examined in detail.

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with, the root of

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cause may be because of early age

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. In my country, in the past, there was a norm that everyone had to work hard for a living, even if the jobs did not appeal to them, and parents always taught their children that if they chose a

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, they would get nothing but regret and poverty.

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, my father told me that when he was young, my grandfather needed him to be a doctor because

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would earn

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income and it was an

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job

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, he became a doctor, but he told me that was not what he actually wanted to do.

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, there was several

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content on the media,

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as televisions, billboards, advertisements and so on, as a soft power that could be a propaganda tool to implant their thoughts. So, these notions have been attached to their perspective from

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. As a consequence of

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problem, that mindset is forwarded to young

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because of their parents.

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, it makes

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believe that they have to work for money or choose a

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that is

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accepted by the public,

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they will be considered unacceptable in society. At present,

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, the world is changing,

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also

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have to change their perspective. There are various kinds of

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paths that can be selected from our ability and skills, not only doctors and teachers should be admitted, but

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artists and other jobs. According to the information mentioned above, it can be concluded that the reason that makes individuals limit their

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paths is because of the customs from the past.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

309 words

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dread
passion
inherent talent
fufilling
career
job
fulfilled
unhappy
unsatisfied
work-life balance
burnout
stress
depression
anxiety
self-esteem
emotional well-being
potential
achieve
success
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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think, teachers do not need a training course. Discuss both views along with your opinion

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing. Explain where, when and why

Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Over the last few decades, there has been an increase in international tourism. Some people think that tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?