Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now `one big traffic jam`. How true do you think this statment is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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the earth are now one big

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statement, because nowadays each person has their own car. The car industry and people`s desire to buy a machine is growing day by day.

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large number of cars leads to their congestion. In my opinion,

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, one key solution for the problem is

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transport

. But, in many countries,

this

is not convenient and too expensive.

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why people still prefer to take their own cars rather than by bus.

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can be achieved by improving the cost of public

transport

.

In addition

, the government must increase the facilities of nation

transport

as per the need of the population.

Secondly

, ensuring the movement of bicycles, which are beneficial to human health. By the way,

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approach is comfortable only for those close to the workplace, those who are far from the workplace of course use a car or bus.

Such

a view can

also

be used to reduce congestion in a certain sense. To conclude,

traffic

jam is often a serious problem in big cities. It is less noticeable in developing countries. People should try to use public

transport

to stop

traffic

congestion.

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during very busy hours on the road can be reduced and more people can get to work on time and avoid the frustration caused by sitting in the middle of a long line of machines.