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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Numerous scientists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. In my opinion, there are only benefits
playing
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 musical
instruments
.
Initially
, listening to
music
, singing or playing musical
instruments
 can give us an amazing mood. After school
children
 should listen to
music
, sing,dance or play
own
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their own
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 favourite musical
instruments
. They can enjoy doing it. They can go an additional course to learn dancing, singing or playing musical
instruments
.
Furthermore
, schools have a perfect subject -
music
. In my own experience,when I studied at school my
favorite
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favourite
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 subject was
music
, because in that lesson we could relax. We could sing our
favorite
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favourite
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 songs.
Teacher
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The teacher
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 was just a fantastic woman. She taught us to love
music
. In conclusion, I totally agree with
this
 statement.
In addition
, parents should give a chance for
children
 to choose their future job and they should be interested in their
children
 in
music
 . In my opinion,
music
 - must be
childrens'
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a childrens'
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 hobby.
Moreover
, in the future
children
, who love
music
,when they are likely to be an adult,
music
maybe
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may be
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 their
second
 profession. After doing their work, they can play musical
instruments
 and earn extra money . If someone wants to be rich,
that is
 the best way.
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