Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is true that the

last

century has seen the greatest innovation and implementation of technical marvels in our society and significant change in our daily

life

as a result

but I disagree with the idea that

this

is a better age to live as compared to older times or upcoming future. As mentioned here no one can deny that industries like medical, manufacturing, electronics and communication have revolutionized over time. We have a higher

life

expectancy due to the discovery of new drugs and medical procedures not to mention cosmetic therapies to look younger and suit other desires. Transportation and communication made

this

world smaller. It is no more a dream to reach remote corners of the world in a day. Being in touch with any person located at any place is just a press of a button away. Appliances have taken the load of laborious work like cleaning and shifting. In spite of the fact that research and invention made

life

easier and more comfortable but could not guarantee the increased quality of

life

. With the advancement of technology, threats of weapons have been magnified. Human

life

became less secure in the face of terrorism all over the world. Gadgets made people more self-centred and materialistic. Families are broken into individuals. Too much attachment with communication tools created gaps in human relationships.

As a result

, we can see the development of science in spite of being a boon to society and human

life

could not assure quality

life

rather turned out to be the cause of loneliness and depression sometimes. As human beings, we should control technology rather than let technology controls us. Only that can make us reach a better time.

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

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