You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam Editor I am writing
this
letter in order to draw your attention to inaccurate
information
published in your
magazine
. Let me start by pointing out that the correct indigenous name of the city Nhandeara is City of the Sun, not Path of the Sun, as you have mentioned in the article Historical Cities of Brazil. The reason I am able to give
such
information
is that I am a history teacher and I have always lived in
this
town. As to why to give the accurate
information
is extremely relevant is because your journal is an internationally well-recognized
magazine
, for which people read when would like to travel or know about places around the world.
Thus
, providing the correct
information
about something is a way to guarantee that tourists will be well informed. With regards to the
action
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related to
this
issue, I would appreciate it if you could write a note in your
next
magazine
edition providing the correct
information
.
In addition
, more research could be done by the
magazine
to provide readers with the reasons behind the different names of cities in Brazil. I am looking forward to a response on how you addressed
this
matter. Yours faithfully, Christina Smith
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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