Countries should produce the food that their population eats, and import as little as possible. To what extent do agree and disagree? Give reasons, examples to you answer.

In current days, it is common that
countries
import
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food
products
from other foreign
countries
.
For instance
, Japan imports various fruit
products
from Taiwan.
This
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raises
us
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a
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question
whether
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countries
should buy
foods
from other
countries
or they should produce food
products
by
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on
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their own as
many
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much
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as possible. In the following, I will offer my view. Some argue that
countries
should not rely on imported
foods
; rather, they should produce
foods
by
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on
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their own via manufacturing or farming.
This
way is beneficial to
countries
' stable development since they will not be
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affected
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effected
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affected
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by other
countries
easily.
For instance
, if the output
countries
are in financial
crsis
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crisis
crises
, they may raise the
products
' prices. In
this
way,
countries
that import too many food
prodcuts
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products
may spend a large sum of money on those
products
.
As a result
, they have to cut off their expenditure on other
stuffs
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,
such
as infrastructure, education, or medicine,
hence
detrimental to their own development.
However
, I think for some small
countries
; they are hard to produce
foods
by
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on
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their own. An
exemplar
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is Singapore.
This
samll
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small
country does not have
enoguh
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enough
land and population to
develope
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develop
their own farming industry.
Consequently
, they primarily focus on providing financial services, which need not land and population, to other
countries
.
Therefore
, the Singapore government does not really have a choice. It can only import
foods
from other
countries
for the consumption of
their
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citizens. In short, I agree that
countries
producing
foods
by
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on
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their own
is
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are
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advantage
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an advantage
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to their development. Yet, in some special cases, purchasing
foods
from other nations is unavoidable.
Thus
, at least for those particular cases, I think that
countries
do not have obligation to produce
foods
by
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on
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their own.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-sufficiency
  • trade dependency
  • food security
  • sustainable agriculture
  • local economies
  • carbon footprint
  • supply chain
  • food miles
  • agricultural sector
  • domestic production
  • import substitution
  • food sovereignty
  • global supply chains
  • trade imbalances
  • food standards
  • economic resilience
  • biodiversity
  • cultural heritage
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