Countries should produce the food that their population eats, and import as little as possible. To what extent do agree and disagree? Give reasons, examples to you answer.

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In current days, it is common that

countries

import

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to import

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food

products

from other foreign

countries

For instance

, Japan imports various fruit

products

from Taiwan.

This

phenomena

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raises

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apply

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the

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question

whether

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of whether

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countries

should buy

foods

from other

countries

or they should produce food

products

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their own as

many

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much

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as possible. In the following, I will offer my view. Some argue that

countries

should not rely on imported

foods

; rather, they should produce

foods

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their own via manufacturing or farming.

This

way is beneficial to

countries

' stable development since they will not be

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affected

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effected

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affected

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by other

countries

easily.

For instance

, if the output

countries

are in financial

crsis

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crisis

crises

, they may raise the

products

' prices. In

this

way,

countries

that import too many food

prodcuts

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products

may spend a large sum of money on those

products

As a result

, they have to cut off their expenditure on other

stuffs

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stuff

kinds of stuff

pieces of stuff

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such

as infrastructure, education, or medicine,

hence

detrimental to their own development.

However

, I think for some small

countries

; they are hard to produce

foods

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their own. An

exemplar

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example

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is Singapore.

This

samll

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small

country does not have

enoguh

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enough

land and population to

develope

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develop

their own farming industry.

Consequently

, they primarily focus on providing financial services, which need not land and population, to other

countries

Therefore

, the Singapore government does not really have a choice. It can only import

foods

from other

countries

for the consumption of

their

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its

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citizens. In short, I agree that

countries

producing

foods

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their own

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are

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advantage

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an advantage

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to their development. Yet, in some special cases, purchasing

foods

from other nations is unavoidable.

Thus

, at least for those particular cases, I think that

countries

do not have obligation to produce

foods

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their own.

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Countries should produce the food that their population eats, and import as little as possible. To what extent do agree and disagree? Give reasons, examples to you answer.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In many parts of the world, women study science and technology, but donot work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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