A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans. On the other hand, other argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various need, including uses for food and research. What is your opinion?

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Some communities around the globe may opine that
animals
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should not be used by people for various purposes since they have the right to live on
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planet
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as
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.
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, another part may oppose
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opine by claiming ,
animals
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should be used to complete their various needs.
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these living creatures may need some capital requirements of
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,
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writer believes that we have to guarantee the protection of these
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in the world .
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with the animal rights, like
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these living creatures
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have the right to live freely on
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planet
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since
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does not completely belong to
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. Unfortunately , due to various reasons like war, political power and economic reasons , various nations around the world try to destroy the natural habitat of
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by means of deforestation.
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, these unethical behaviours lead to the extinction of some
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from the earth and it will lead to unbalance of nature .
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, according to a report published by Oxford University , the Extinction of the Dodos from the Moracious island in early 1800 leads to an increase in the population of insects on the island and, ultimately lead to destroying the crop.
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, some
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may need to
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by
humans
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due to various reasons like food, farming and
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. Since , most of these
animals
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are part of the food chain , using them as food will not affect their existence on the
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.
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, some of these
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like monkeys have to
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for
experiments
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of new drugs , since they
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belong to the same subspecies as
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.
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, products of these
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can be used for the existence of both these species on the
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and
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can be illustrated by
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of some antibiotics like ciprofloxacin line , which is now used for both species to treat tuberculosis. In conclusion ,
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some people try to
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all living creatures for human
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, we have to control the usage of
animals
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for various purposes and we have to guarantee their existence on the
planet
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since the
planet
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belongs to every living creature .
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