A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans. On the other hand, other argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various need, including uses for food and research. What is your opinion?
Some communities around the globe may opine that
animals
should not be used by people for various purposes since they have the right to live on this
planet
as humans
. On the other hand
, another part may oppose this
opine by claiming , animals
should be used to complete their various needs. Although
these living creatures may need some capital requirements of humans
, this
writer believes that we have to guarantee the protection of these animals
in the world .
To begin
with the animal rights, like humans
these living creatures also
have the right to live freely on this
planet
since this
does not completely belong to humans
. Unfortunately , due to various reasons like war, political power and economic reasons , various nations around the world try to destroy the natural habitat of animals
by means of deforestation. Moreover
, these unethical behaviours lead to the extinction of some animals
from the earth and it will lead to unbalance of nature . For example
, according to a report published by Oxford University , the Extinction of the Dodos from the Moracious island in early 1800 leads to an increase in the population of insects on the island and, ultimately lead to destroying the crop.
On the other hand
, some animals
may need to use
by humans
due to various reasons like food, farming and experiments
. Since , most of these animals
are part of the food chain , using them as food will not affect their existence on the planet
. furthermore
, some of these animals
like monkeys have to use
for experiments
of new drugs , since they also
belong to the same subspecies as humans
. However
, products of these experiments
can be used for the existence of both these species on the planet
and this
can be illustrated by experiments
of some antibiotics like ciprofloxacin line , which is now used for both species to treat tuberculosis.
In conclusion , although
some people try to use
all living creatures for human use
, we have to control the usage of animals
for various purposes and we have to guarantee their existence on the planet
since the planet
belongs to every living creature .Submitted by mngldissanayaka on
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