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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The trend of moving abroad has increased drastically in the present scenario. Whilst the occurrence in social and practical problems with them can badly impact.
This
 essay totally agrees with the given statement because it will consume
one
's productive time and will lead to difficulty adjusting to society. On the
one
 hand, a lack of understanding of international language will take lots of time and could result in misperception by another rival.
This
 can even lead to conflict. To cite an example, varying in the foreign pronunciation has become
one
 of the major problems in understanding in people.
On the other hand
, due to differences in cultures and norms populations are getting difficulty adjusting to the foreign community.
One
 hasn't been able to celebrate their culture comfortably.To illustrate, Nepalese especially Hindu people living in the USA only get festive holidays during Christmas which they don't celebrate leading to a problem in celebrating their own festival like Dashain, Tihar etc.
Thus
,
this
 gives a huge burden to them. In conclusion, residing in
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foreign country can result in major problems in terms of community and practicality as the language barrier consumes a huge amount of time where
one
 couldn't communicate with another as needed;
also
, it leads to trouble adjusting in the community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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