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More people will work from home and more student will study at home if computer technology becomes cheap and accessible. What will be the advantage and disadvantage if this happen?

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 benefits,the most significant advantage is regarding tele worker they have
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 of worker hours so they can enjoy
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from overseas
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. On the paradoxical site, there are many drawbacks as well,
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,humans like to
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 people will feel isolated.
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personally
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