Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:  Describe the item you lost.  Explain how you lost it.  Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear sir , I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have lost my digital camera during my holiday vacation. I would let know you my camera is black in colour and LG brand which is covered by brown lander beg.It happens in Amritsar.

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, a few days before, I have visited Amritsar with my family for a holiday vacation. we were staying home in the central city of Amritsar. we went to see the museum which was very rashing after when we reached home

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I noticed my camcorder was not missing so I think that I lost it at the market . I brought that it six months ago, according to me it is still under the insurance. I have a report from the police station already but I need your help to tell them some important information about it so they can find it as possible as soon. I look forward to hearing from you . yours sincerely Karanvir Pahwa

sr8930308Fri Mar 25 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

166 words

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Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:  Describe the item you lost.  Explain how you lost it.  Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

The use of nuclear power as a clean energy source. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

“Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”