You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter - Give details of the situation - Describe the documents - Say what action you want the post office to take.

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Dear sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to check on my document has not reached New Delhi as it is more than a week now. I would like to know the situation of my package that was given at the Amritsar office

last

week

and

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the airway bill number is E11112652 and it is more than 5 working days and it has not yet reached New Delhi. I have called your office three times already and they haven’t

help

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me at all. My documents are important as it has 200 photos of my customer’s wedding celebration and the invoices from my company. The photos are expensive prints for the customer and my clients haven’t received

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them

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. Kindly track my document and either return it to me or deliver it to the address in New Delhi.

Also

, let me know

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what I should do if the package is lost at your end and who can help me with the claim. I am hoping you will call me or email me soon as

this

matter is very urgent. Yours sincerely, Jazzy Lee

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You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter - Give details of the situation - Describe the documents - Say what action you want the post office to take.

immigration has become very useful these days what is your opinion about it

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