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Quyidagi diagrammalar West Park o'rta maktabida 1950 yilda qurilganidan beri sodir bo'lgan o'zgarishlarni ko'rsatadi

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Diagrammalarda
West
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Park
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 maktabi 1950, 1980
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va
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VA
 2010
yillarda
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Willard
 rivojlanishining
uch
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much
such
xil
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will
 bosqichida ko'rsatilgan. 1950 yilda
West
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 Parkda
G
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'
arbiy
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 Parkning
asosiy
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yo
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'lakchasida uylar
va
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 uylarning
orqasida
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joylashgan
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 maydonlar
mavjud
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.
Asosiy
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g
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'
arbiy
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 parkdan
davom
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 etib,
maktab
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va
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maktab
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orqasida
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bolalar
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maydonchasi
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bor
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edi
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. 1980 yilga kelib,
asosiy
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yo
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'
lda
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avtoturargoh
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bor
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edi
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va
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 uning yonida fan qora
edi
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. Kino blokining
orqa
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tomonida
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sport
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maydonchasi
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bor
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edi
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.
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Asosiy
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Assay
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yo'
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you'll
lda
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davom
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da vom
etish
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fetish
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maktabning
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maintaining
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asosiy
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assay
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binosi
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binos
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va
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VA
uning
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tuning
using
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orqasida
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or qasida
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bolalar
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dollar
bolivar
maydonchasi
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. 2010-yilda qoraqalpog'istonning
orqa
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tomonida
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avtoturargoh
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mavjud
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. Ilmiy
blokning
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blocking
booking
 yon
tomida
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Comida
 kichikroq
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bolalar
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dollar
bolivar
maydonchasi
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va
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VA
via
maktab
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binosi
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binos
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orqasida
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or qasida
sport
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maydonchasi
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joylashgan
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.
West
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Park
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school
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 at three different stages in its development in 1950,1980 and 2010. In 1950 in
West
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Park
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, there
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houses
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were houses
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 on the main
rood
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road
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 in
West
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Park
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, and
formland
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farmland
 behind the
houses
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.Continuing from the main root
west
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park
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, there was a
playground
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 behind the
school
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 and the
school
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. By 1980, there was a
car
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park
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 on the main
road
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 and a science black abutting to it. There was a
sports
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field
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 at the back of the
scince
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science
block
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. Continuing on the main
road
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 is the main building of the
school
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 and behind it is the
playground
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. In 2010, there is a
car
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park
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 at the back of the
scintific
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scientific
 black.On the side roof of the scientific
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block
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,block
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 there is a smaller
playground
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 and a
sports
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field
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 behind the
school
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 building.
West
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Park
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 maktabi 1950, 1980
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va
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VA
 2010
yillarda
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Willard
 rivojlanishining
uch
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much
such
xil
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will
 bosqichida ko'rsatilgan. 1950 yilda
West
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 Parkda
G
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'
arbiy
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 Parkning
asosiy
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yo
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'lakchasida uylar
va
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 uylarning
orqasida
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joylashgan
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 maydonlar
mavjud
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.
Asosiy
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g
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'
arbiy
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 parkdan
davom
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 etib,
maktab
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va
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maktab
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orqasida
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bolalar
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maydonchasi
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bor
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edi
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. 1980 yilga kelib,
asosiy
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yo
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'
lda
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avtoturargoh
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bor
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edi
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va
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 uning yonida fan qora
edi
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. Kino blokining
orqa
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tomonida
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sport
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maydonchasi
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bor
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edi
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.
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Asosiy
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Assay
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yo'
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you'll
lda
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davom
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da vom
etish
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fetish
 -
maktabning
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maintaining
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asosiy
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assay
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binosi
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binos
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va
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VA
uning
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tuning
using
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orqasida
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or qasida
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bolalar
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dollar
bolivar
maydonchasi
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. 2010-yilda qoraqalpog'istonning
orqa
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tomonida
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avtoturargoh
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mavjud
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. Ilmiy
blokning
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blocking
booking
 yon
tomida
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Comida
 kichikroq
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bolalar
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dollar
bolivar
maydonchasi
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Use synonyms
va
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VA
via
maktab
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Use synonyms
binosi
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binos
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orqasida
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or qasida
sport
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maydonchasi
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joylashgan
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.
West
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Park
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school
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 at three different stages in its development in 1950,1980 and 2010. In 1950 in
West
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Park
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, there
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houses
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were houses
show examples
 on the main
rood
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road
show examples
 in
West
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Park
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, and
formland
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farmland
 behind the
houses
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.Continuing from the main root
west
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park
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, there was a
playground
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 behind the
school
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 and the
school
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. By 1980, there was a
car
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park
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 on the main
road
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 and a science black abutting to it. There was a
sports
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field
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 at the back of the
scince
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science
block
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. Continuing on the main
road
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 is the main building of the
school
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 and behind it is the
playground
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. In 2010, there is a
car
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park
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 at the back of the
scintific
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scientific
 black.On the side roof of the scientific
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block
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,block
show examples
 there is a smaller
playground
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 and a
sports
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field
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 behind the
school
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 building.

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