You are moving to a new country to go to university and will need a part-time job. You have a friend who lives in that country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • apologise for not staying in touch • explain why you’re moving to this country • ask your friend if he/she can help you find a job.

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Dear Harman, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am sorry for not making a contact with you since

last

year.

This

was mainly due to the reason that I deactivated my Instagram and Facebook due to my studies.

Moreover

, I lost your Whatsapp contact. You will be happy to hear that I have completed my Bachelors of Computer Science and now I am moving to Australia for higher studies.

In addition

, I have got admission to the University of Sydney for a Masters's in the same field. I am moving in

month.

However

, I am facing a financial burden in managing all my expenses.

Although

I have received a scholarship from the university that would pay half of my fees, the other half is still an issue for me.

Therefore

, I wish to do a part-time job along with my studies. I wish you could help me to find a job on time as I know that you have good contacts as you have been living in Sydney for the past five years. Take Care and I will see you soon. Best Regards, Aman

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7 paragraphs

187 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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