in their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the current society, the organizations tend to chiefly highlight that their merchandise
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new in their advertisement.
This
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my point of view about considering it as
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or negative development. To commence, perhaps the insisting on manufacturing and publicizing new goods more than used ones is due to public attitude to avoidance of
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things. There are some
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reasons
leading to these desires.
Firstly
, it is indisputable that people are hardly able to trust
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stuff which
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used before based on their probable technical or
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genetic
difficulties, as examples.
For instance
, the electronic devices which are formerly used, are more likely to possess an issue in the hardware parts,
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hiding
eyes through buying, and as there are no
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guarantees
for them people may lose large amount ao money. Looking more closely
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the matter,
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massive detrimental issues with regard to the
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environment
. To clarify, the overconsumption which
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the
world
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is the outcome of
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approach
like
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. Every day a copious of devices are thrown away and waste of them make
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nature
in huge danger.
Therefore
,
however
several advantages
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as the improvement in the
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attention to
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admirable
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, I believe its drawbacks outweigh benefits. To sum up, it is likely the
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attitude and
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desirability
in market pursue the organization to spotlighting the being
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feature of a product rather than other characters, which I opine that
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certainly will bring along the harmful effects to our nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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