You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

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Dear Sir ,

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is Mee Mee who stayed at your hotel

last

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week and I am writing

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letter to inform

about

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you about

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the bad experience that I encountered during my stay. To being with , as your hotel is pretty all the rage and has good reviews from customers , I and my friend chose your hotel to spend our precious time . Honestly, everything was rather good except the air conditioner . The noise from

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really made us annoyed and we did not get a decent sleep for the whole night.

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the next

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morning, we called the receptionist to explain our situation , and she was pretty supportive . Within a few hours, service technicians came and repaired it rapidly. And , we were very pleased with customer service and much appreciated

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the receptionist ‘s help.

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, I feel that something needs to be done about

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situation , and I suggest that you should do

monthly

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check

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on everything and follow up

regular

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with regular

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maintenance to go smoothly

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place. I trust that you will give

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matter your immediate attention. Yours faithfully, Mee Mee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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