Some people think that government should invest in saving local languages while others think its a waste of money. Discuss both views and your opinion.

A few individuals believe that government should allocate resources to preserve local dialects while some dispute
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a sheer waste of money.
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and I will give my sentiment. On one hand, vernacular languages contribute to cultural diversity among communities and
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societies from each other.
Therefore
conservation of
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of belonging among people.
For instance
, Americans of African origin lost their heritage
as a result
of neglecting their native language.
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, local language
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family bonds by enabling
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down of traditional customs to the younger generation.
This
is because the older generation speaks these languages fluently with their children,
hence
, improving communication.
On the other hand
, the opponents argue that
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with the coming of globalisation people need to communicate using languages that can be understood by other people.
This
will help grow financial firms internationally,
thus
, bringing more revenue to the nation.
For example
, business meetings between international enterprises are conducted using one language.
Additionally
, the government can divert these resources to renovate and acquire new hospital equipment,
consequently
, reducing mortality and morbidity among citizens. In conclusion, both views have merits on balance. In my perception, I believe conservation of cultural heritage and improved social interactions is more important.
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