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Some people say history is important subject and other say science and technology.To what extent do agree or disagree.

#people #history #science #technology
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The contemporary
world
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 is the
world
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 of
science
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 and
technology
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,
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, some subjects related to these are more important to learn compared to the
subject
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 of
history
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.
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, In my opinion,
education
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 related to
science
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 and
technology
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 is much more important than
knowledge
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 related to
history
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. As we know,
science
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 and
technology
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 have changed the lifestyle of humans in every aspect. Almost everything we use in our daily life is the result of advancements in
science
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 and
technology
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.
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, it is essential for everyone to have
knowledge
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 about
technology
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.It is the need of today's
world
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 to get updated about
technology
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 and
science
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.
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, banking , shopping, business and
education
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 in the present
world
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 are online.
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 ,it
also
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 offers numerous career opportunities in future as compared to the
subject
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 of
history
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. To illustrate, by getting an
education
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 in the field of
science
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 one can become a doctor, scientist, engineer, technician and many more.As all these professions need advanced
education
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 in a particular field of
science
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.
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,in the
subject
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 of
history
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, students mainly get the
knowledge
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 about the past,
for example
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, the relation between the countries, tradition and culture of different nations, tribes,
world
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 wars , battles etc.
This
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 type of
knowledge
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 is good to have, but in my opinion, cannot provide many career opportunities.According to one survey in India, people who have degrees in the
subject
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 of arts like
history
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 or political
science
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 are more unemployed compared to the people who have degrees in
science
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 due to the lesser number of jobs available in the field of arts.
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, more than eighty per cent of the students take medical or non-medical subjects in their secondary school after completing high school. In conclusion, every
subject
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 has its importance in life, but the present
world
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 is the
world
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 of
technology
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 and it is a must for everyone to have
knowledge
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 about
this
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.
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