The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the information about how Grange
Park
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changed from 1920 to nowadays. Overall, it is clear that the playground almost changed everything apart from two entrances and the rose garden which was on the right-hand side when entered the
park
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from Arnold Avenue in the year 1920. Meanwhile, a new car parking space is established today. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that there used to have three rose gardens in the
park
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but one of them was removed and the other one that was on the left-hand side when entering the
park
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from Arnold Avenue was replaced by a cafe. The Pond for water plants was
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replaced by a Children's play area.
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, the seats were all been removed.
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, the stage for musicians was changed to the amphitheatre for concerts and the fountain which is located in the central
park
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was replaced by a new rose garden and four new seats. A new water feature and an underground car
park
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are established today.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alterations
  • renovations
  • modernize
  • upgraded
  • transformed
  • landscaping
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • green spaces
  • eco-friendly
  • public space
  • community impact
  • historical elements
  • conservation
  • recreational areas
  • urban planning
  • sustainable development
  • layout
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