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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The rules of childrens' education
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 always been a highly debated issue. One of the
recent
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 debated issues is
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whether oblige
adultscents
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adolescents
adult scents
 to do voluntary works or not. Personally, I think suggesting compulsory
work
 to
students
 can be totally a wrong issue.
Firstly
, children are overloaded by their too much
homeworks
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homework
, on top of that they have to get prepare for their exams.
Additionally
, schools have limited
students
' time more and more,
thus
 children have less and less time to pay together. Unpaid community services can be a waste of time
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students
, too. Nowadays, schools are not enough for success.
For example
, most of the pupils that I know are joining different classes
such
 as dance,
second
 language, or even extra math classes.
Handeling
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Handling
 those classes
in addition
 to schools, is
such
 a nightmare to pupils and adding more activities can put the
students
 in a worse condition. On the other side,
volounteery
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volunteer
volunteers
 works would be
unvaluable
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invaluable
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 compulsory occasions.
For instance
, when a student should do a
volounteery
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volunteer
work
 as his duty, he would not enjoy it and that
work
 may resent him. To conclude,
volunteery
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volunteer
volunteering
works
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 can put
students
 under too much pressure and lose
its
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their
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 valuable meaning in
the
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forced conditions.
However
, I personally, believe that it can not be a good idea to
obliging
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students
 to
work
 more than they should.
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