Some people believe that a county becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?

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The line chart compares the average emissions of carbon dioxide of each
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in the
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, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of 40 years. It is clear that the
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of United Kindom released the most metric
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of CO2 on average over the period shown, and the Portuguese produced the least amount per one. But the
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for the
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went on a fell in
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30-year period,
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, the
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for Portugal rose quickly. In 1967,
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in the
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emitted close to 11 metric
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of CO2 for each one, and the
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most amount of CO2 emissions was Sweden, with nearly 9 metric
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. The
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of Italy and Portugal produced just under 5 metric
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each. Just a decades later, the
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for Sweden was rose dramatically near to the
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of the
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. Between 1967 and 2007, CO2 production from each
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in Italy rose quickly close to a peak of 9 metric
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, and the
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for Portugal rose at a similar space from almost 1.5 to 5.5 metric
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.
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, the average CO2 emissions of each Swedish saw a quickly fell in the after 30 decades, whereas the
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for the
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fell only slightly.
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