It is importnat for children to learn the diffrence between right and wring at an early age. punishment is necessary to hekp them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The ability to distinguish right and wrong is necessary for children. Any adolescent needs to learn some important life skills for a better and a
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successful
life. It is believed that
punishment
can be used as a helpful tool for teaching values to students. I strongly disagree with
this
because of many reasons.
Firstly
, acting in a bad manner with children can ruin their self-
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esteem
and
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.
For example
, punishing a kid would increase his sense of inferiority and grief gradually
thus
in future he might lose his self-
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esteem
and face many psychological disorders.
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,
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mind is as important as being able to recognize bad and good.
Secondly
, youngsters need more explanation for a better
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understanding
.
For instance
, being noticed about the reasons
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their faults sounds more interesting to them. Teaching adolescents by using
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range of examples and comparisons would be a good alternative to
punishment
.
On the other hand
, more explanations may lead to more intellectual activities,
thus
students who are heard more examples would have more active minds which can
analize
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analyze
every fact logically. All in all, giving
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range of details is highly recommended because of its' benefits. To summarise,
although
punishment
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easy tool for teaching norms to students, it has lots of disadvantages for youngsters.
In other words
, not any easy way is the best way. In my
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punishment
can be the worst thing for teaching and other ways like
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that have
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can be used
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