a friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Bob, Hope you're and your family doing well. I heard that you're are willing to participate in vacation camping

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summer. I'm writing to tell you some suggestions that might be useful while your vacation campsite.

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, I'd like to inform you that you'll enjoy

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tour because of plenty of people from around the world with different cultures that will enable you to explore vast experience differences

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, The amazon forest is your camping site so you have the chance to view skyrocket mountains and cold river water beside nature will provide you eye-catching view and I know that you're a nature lover person.

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, many games and sports activities you will feel like over the moon.

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, I'd

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like to recommend to you some problems that you might have faced on-campus site

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as food issues you've to cook on their own basis so you should take the necessary equipment for cooking.

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, the Amazon forest is full of snakes and dangered species so you should take care while sleeping in the camp as well mosquitos is another problem so you should take your mosquito lotion them with.

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, I'd like to inform you that

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summer I won't go camping as I am busy nowadays and want to take some rest and spend quality time with family and you

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know that my final exam will be held on the 30th of March. Hope you'll enjoy the tour buddy. best of luck Shaban Raza

Shabanraza489Sun Mar 27 2022

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

250 words

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