you are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your university id card.write to the local police station, giving details of who you are,what happened and ask to record your details so you can apply for a new id card.

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Dear Sir, I am a student

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2 years at the

University

of UK. In 2020, 31st March, I visited the college and after regular in the class. On the campus or the

university

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they provide the

card

but,

unfortunately

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I lost my

card

on 22nd March 2022.

Moreover

, I am originally from India, but I visited here in 2020, for an academic career. I am studying for an MBA,

second

semester in the UK

university

. My name is Viram Gorania and I am 31st years old.

In addition

, I am living with my friends in Vocally Street,

Malstone

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Milestone

, London.My contact number is 00449727554054 and I have a passport so here is my passport number M989806. On 22nd March 2022, I visited the

university

with my

card

but after the end of the

class

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I lost my

card

and the

University

campus.

Finally

, please record my lost

card

details because

this

report will help me to

apply

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my new

card

. If you record these details and give me a copy of the record so I will quickly receive my new

card

and after I will visit the

university

. Yours Faithfully

Viram

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Vikram

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